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Hey guys, I am new to WritersCafe, though I previously had an account on Inkpop. The recent changes in inkpop have made the website more difficult to use, and the changes in my own writing have opened my eyes to the fact that I no longer feel like I belong in the teen writing community, and would like advice from older, more experienced writers. Thus, I am now a member of WritersCafe. Now, I apologize for that whole spiel, and here is the reason I am making this thread: I have recently written an essay for my 10th grade English class, discussing the nature of tragedy and discerning the tragic heroes in Sophocles' famous work, Antigone. Now, I am simply looking for constructive criticism on my piece of writing. It is not terribly long, and if anyone has a minute or two, I would greatly appreciate any input. Thank you so much, in advance, and I hope to make some new friends here in the future. :)

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