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James George

What do you guys think of this poem? Please, honest answers 5 Years Ago Title: FOR ONE NINE - James George  For one Nine The familiar tale of one man Who raved and raved on because he wanted the digits turned I said we couldn't work out And that you could never meet up  But a bold statement was rock hard And an ego from Ten grew up He comes macho man ready To make it work between us  Here come the man daring To take this walk to release us I can. I will. Trust me, he said But he never did or ever does Never has, never will cross Psychical? No. Soothsayer? Not likely  Prove me if I be wrong You liar of a man. You lie You lied when you lied. It's a lie each and every time  Because you needed just one Nine. You lied to make me feel Lied to make me cling  To this hope that was not real And the Nine you needed in digits  Nine digits for a biliion No limits with my Bullion You determined to make this cut And that, at any cost Ten was the score as you said Ten, you told me since age Ten Now you're bent on that Nine Nine all along as you lie all along. I'll make the dial for you And be glad to tell on you To end this mockery on my mind As I watch you end up behind bars For one Nine You've struggled all your life To gain; to pay; to play Every one for your selfish gain.  But you only needed one Just one approval  One snippet per time To reach that one Nine For one Nine You embraced the curse for your pursuit And now you're on the run from lawsuits Because for one Nine you became 419 (the Trickster)