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A new poem to read

9 Years Ago


In my condition I can see
what in the world is happening to me
does this whole world have blinders on 
and can not tell the lie from the truth

Oh hell what's the use
everybody lies
some times
Dishonesty rules the world today

Media controls the public 
opinion some are bias
to political gesturing
Politics is no exact science

It screams out loyalty to a certain party
Democratie or Républicain
Just a two party system in America
All is fair in Love war and Politics

Nothing but dirty pool
Left to blame for the shape the country is in
The pool of fools that run this country
Never lets a new party inn
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Re: A new poem to read

9 Years Ago


The whole poem can be defined as a nice gesture of o social and political minded poet. It implies some hand-craft but lacking of (intentionally tried) rhyme, of course the musical tone is overwhelmed by the nicely distinguished verses. As far as the content, anyone can say that comes forth very clear and impulsive, but all in all the inner idea is dramatically (as far as it is experienced) expressed through the last verse, especially by the word “inn”.