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create a character.

15 Years Ago


Based off:

1.      name

2.      age

3.      job

4.      ethnicity

5.      appearance

6.      residence

7.      favorite color

8.      friends

9.      favorite foods

10.  drinking patterns

11.  phobias

12.  faults

13.  pets

14.  religion

15.  hobbies

16.  single or married

17.  Children?

18.  temperament

19.  something hated

20.  Secrets?

21.  Strong memories?

22.  Any illnesses?

23.  Nervous gestures?

24.  sleep patterns

 

 

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 Name: Juliet Marie Caroline      

Age: 24

Job: Works at Star Buck’s Coffee at the register in Newark, NJ [744 Broad Street NewarkNJ 07175]

 Ethnicity: Caucasian

Appearance: Very pale, but not extremely. She has a blunt bang cut, [brown hair]; medium curly, hair flows to the middle of her back. [A few inches past the bra fastener.] Pale, icy blue eyes. She always has bags under each eye.

Residence: An apartment in Elizabeth, New Jersey [460 Jefferson Avenue, Elizabeth, NJ, 07202,]

Favorite color: Pale colors, but it changes from day to day with her mood.

 Friends: She split with her friend after her friend's mother took her to an adoptive care center where they found her a foster home.

 Favorite foods: She's a major health nut, anything healthy.

Drinking patterns: She's never drank, except for an instance in her childhood were she was forced to drink, by her father. But otherwise she drinks a lot of water.

Phobias: Needles intimidate her, closed areas

 Faults: Juliet believes that she messes up too much. She’s too cautious in just about everything she does. Except for writing, she just lets herself go.

Pets: a cat, 2 1/2 years of age, named Guard Dog

Religion: She has been Baptist ever since she bought her own place in 1999, [age 20]

Hobbies: Writing poetry and stories, making bracelets, taking care of her cat

Single or married: Single, never been married, never thought of marriage.

Children: None, she’s afraid her father or mother will come back, steal her children, and abuse them as she was when she was a child.

Temperament: Juliet enjoys watching the simplicities in life. Her favorite activity is watching the rain seep down the gutters on the side of her house. Being laid back makes her prone

 

Something hated: She doesn't hate, just strongly dislikes. Rarely has a problem with people, even if she is having a bad day.

Secrets: Her mother has psychological issues, and that’s most of the reason why she/and her husband abused Juliet. Her mother divorced her father when she was at the age of fifteen. [she ran away a year later, to the day] and stayed with her friend for a few months before her friends mother kicked her out.

 Her past isn’t what people think, her parents were rude and never believed in her. An original case of child abuse (Very little physical abuse, just mental), but she never told anyone. She ran away at the age of 16 and lived with her best friend, whom she isn’t friends with anymore, for a few months.

 

]Strong memories: The night her best friends mother kicked her out of her house after she had run away from home. There was kicking and screaming, tears.

Any illnesses: Her mother had psychological illnesses, but she hasn't noticed any symptoms. 

Nervous gestures:

Sleeping patterns: She sleeps soundly at night, just when she is supposed to. 8 - 10 hours

This isn't as detailed as I would like it to be, but this is the best I can come up with at the moment.

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15 Years Ago


your character is VERY detailed. Is she a character your using for a story?
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  Yes she is. :D How can you tell? Haha. Yeah I am writing a fan-fiction and details are everthing.
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This is a character I sort of created for a novel, but never finished, so I'm just making loads of this up. Maybe one day I'll actually finish it...


1.      name: Jonathan 'Saturnine' Edwards (But known only as Saturnine. His name is a mystery. Mainly because he hates it and it's too 'normal' for him.)

2.      age: 23. But wishes he was still 19. It was a good age for him.

3.      job: Full time drag queen/works in a bar in Soho. Occasionally stands in for Twiggy-sales assistant in Cyber Dog down in Camden Town.

4.      ethnicity: Caucasian.

5.      appearance: Glamorous! He is a drag queen after all. He's a lithe, dark haired, blue eyed angel with pale skin and a flawless complexion. He's also the master of make up.

6.      residence: Above his favorite bar, 'Trixabellas' in Soho, London.

7.      favorite color: Neon blue edged in silver.

8.      friends: Martin 'Twiggy' Rivers and Steve. His drag queen friends include Porcelana and Starla. And countless other drinking buddies and various odd associates of bars.

9.      favorite foods: Anything doused in soy sauce and containing egg noddles.

10.  drinking patterns: All the time. White Russians before lunch, mojito with friends, and anything containing vodka followed by a few lines of coke and/or meth. If it isn't going to mess him up, it's not on the cards.

11.  phobias: Being forgotten by history. And having the sh*t kicked out of him because he's gay.

12.  faults: self destructive in the sense that he would rather drink to forget than to actually talk about it. It's getting to the point where it's messing up his relationship with Steve. But he's trying to get his head straight.

13.  pets: Had a cat named Supakit, but it got hit by a car. He's now turned his beloved dead pet into a range of t-shirts with the help of Twiggy.

14.  religion: No one for religion. Saturnine belongs to the church of nu-romantics. (It's set in 1988, so bands like Flock of Seagulls, Ultravox, Human League and Visage. Steve Strange is something of an icon.)

15.  hobbies: Making clothes out of hotel bedclothes and curtains. And sometimes just daydreaming of owning his own fashion retail store.

16.  single or married: In a relationship with Steve, but it's not going well. Steve is addicted to meth and Saturnine is getting bored with Steve's antics. Not to mention the rumours that Steve is sleeping around...

17.  Children? No, but he wouldn't mind a mini Saturnine running about the place.

18.  temperament: Pretty relaxed, but slightly hypocritical of others. Especially Steve and his addiction. But generally, he's a good time guy.

19.  something hated: Homophobics and self righeous morons.

20.  Secrets? His real identity. Easier to cover up with booze and drugs than to admit his life is a mess.

21.  Strong memories? His favorite-at a hotal in Devon with Twiggy and they took the trouser press apart, only to find they didn't know how to put it back together. Closely followed by that time his ex got wasted on acid and ripped the head board off the bed, claiming he was going surfing at 3 in the morning.

22.  Any illnesses?: not really, but the AIDS epidemic scares him. He has friends who have died from it, and he's terrified that one day, it will happen to him. He took a short vow of abstinence in '86 out of fear.

23.  Nervous gestures? Constantly smoking. And when he's not smoking, he mimes smoking with a pen.

24.  sleep patterns: Whenever the party dies. Then he'll crash at the first offer of a bed and snooze for hours.
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Seems fun. Yours is more my thinking than Katie's, but we all have different thinking patterns and Katie is a good writer. That being said, here is the antagonist of my most recent novel:

Based off: Anna and Fiona of my previous stories, physically based off of Amy Lee (that woman is HOT!)

1.      name: Daina Canineine (alias, Astarte)

2.      age: 18, born on the Virgonova (September 3rd)

3.      job: Mercenary, of royal blood

4.      ethnicity: Half-elf (born to the Fire), half-human (Catsnian)

5.      appearance: Long, feathery black hair; flesh as pale as mother-of-pearls, unhindered by the sun; short in stature and scrawny, especially for a killer; elegant long ears and thin brows; a shapely face including a pointed chin and fleshy cheeks; and best of all, sapphires the color of moonless midnight deep in her black eyes

6.      residence: Wherever a job is needed to be done

7.      favorite color: Blue, actually

8.      friends: Her white cat, Precious, though she has her allies

9.      favorite foods: Blood

10.  drinking patterns: None.

11.  phobias: Virginophobia

12.  faults: Cowardice, Shyness

13.  pets: Her cat

14.  religion: Angry at God. Even though it is hinted that she practices Buddhism to some point, she makes her atheism evident by the end of the novel.

15.  hobbies: Master poker player; Master at chess

16.  single or married: Single

17.  Children?: She wants them, but knows deep inside that her chances are slim to none

18.  temperament: Formal lady. She is a kind soul who owns an orphanage, though as one character points out, "She's trying to buy her way into heaven." Either way, she turns the other cheek when others are cruel to her and speaks great wisdom when she talks. Her personality would resemble perfection if it weren't for the fact that she can kill a man in the blink of an eye without so much as knowing his name.

19.  something hated: She hates her main customer silently and works to eventually meet him face to face and kill him

20.  Secrets? Her whole life is a secret

21.  Strong memories? Her memory is superior to any living mortal, so all her memories are strong XP The night of her alleged death is the most vivid one however

22.  Any illnesses? Throughout the novel, she is wounded and fatally poisoned on behalf of her final customer. Also, her Fire Elemental blood makes her cold often and she has an addiction for blood (internally, not bloodlust).

23.  Nervous gestures? Nope. She's calm because of her Zen practices.

24.  sleep patterns: She sleeps when she can. When she does dream, they are strange and abstract because of ancient relics she bears from the old kingdom. Thought she wakes quickly often to rise and defend herself from night prowlers, when her defenses are down, she can sleep like the dead.


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15 Years Ago


all your characters sound amazing <3 great job!

I think it would be fun for you all to write this based off a child yuo would like to have now <333

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im bored so im making up a character for the fun of it. Im gonna do the other one as well.

1.      name: Celena Musgrove

2.      age: 18

3.      job: Barnes N Nobel

4.      ethnicity: whie caucasian

5.      appearance: she has middium length brown hair, brown eyes, long eye lases and glasses, she is 5'6, 120 pounds

6.      residence: alone

7.      favorite color: pink

8.      friends: Carrie, she's been her best friend since first grade

9.      favorite foods: chicken

10.  drinking patterns: 100% anti-alchol

11.  phobias: spiders

12.  faults: shes a nerd and people pick on her for it, shes very pretty but doesnt know it, so she has low self esteem

13.  pets: dog named Benny and a cat named Joon

14.  religion: none

15.  hobbies: reading, studying, writing and WOW

16.  single or married: single

17.  Children?: none

18.  temperament

19.  something hated: animal cruelty

20.  Secrets?: shes in love with Zac Efron

21.  Strong memories?: Mom dieing

22.  Any illnesses?: none

23.  Nervous gestures?: laughs and bites nails

24.  sleep patterns: in bed by 8

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1.      name- Gertrude Elbreath Coxswallow

2.      age- 42

3.      job- independent poetry magazine editor

4.      ethnicity- WHITE!!!!!  EXTREMELY WHITE!!!!

5.      appearance- has a pearl necklace.  likes to wear purple and black outfits.  has a little bit of a protruding tummy, but thinks it makes her look distinguished.

6.      residence- Devon, England

7.      favorite color- light blue, because she knows she can't wear it, and that irks her so badly.

8.      friends- none of note.  some people in the independent publishing world who go to lunch with her, but only when they want to steal her poets.

9.      favorite foods- anything foreign, because English cuisine just isn't good enough.  she also likes clams.

10.  drinking patterns- she drinks herself to sleep.  a little glass of sherry before bedtime with her favorite new poet, which turns into a little bottle of sherry. 

11.  phobias- pakistanis.  undercooked fish.  making a grammatical error in public.

12.  faults- she's slightly racist.  she's also a snob.

13.  pets- she has a horse, but doesn't ride, and doesn't go out to see it.  it's the kind of things english nobility have to have.  she once had a bull mastiff, but it was quite too big to take for walks, so she had it shot.

14.  religion- church of england!

15.  hobbies- reading poetry.  fine dining.  drinking sherry.  watching quiz games.  reading the occasional romance novel when she goes on vacation, so no one who sees her reading it will know who she is.

16.  single or married- single, though not for lack of trying.  the 'favorite new poet' section of her magazine should be changed to the 'favorite new man' section.

17.  Children- no way.  she's allergic to them.

18.  temperament- sour, dour, snobbish, will brutalize someone verbally in public with the slightest provocation.

19.  something hated- pakistanis.  bean dip.  tacos, nachos, or anything else 'texican.'  she hates americans if they have anything other than the flat midwest accent.  are you from the south or new york or new england?  she hates you.

20.  Secrets- she had an abortion in college.

21.  Strong memories- when she was growing up, her grandfather took her out back and showed her the property on his massive estate.  he asked her if she liked it, and she said she did.  he asked her if she would like to have it when he died, and she said she would.  then he told her, 'tough.  you're not a man.  you get nothing.'  from that moment on she has used both her personal and professional lives to crush the male species- whether by seducing them or just by humiliating them.

22.  Any illnesses- hypoglycemic.

23.  Nervous gestures- when she is nervous, she slightly, almost imperceptibly farts.  they hardly ever smell, and they hardly ever are heard, but you can always tell when she does, because she says 'excuse me' each time.  someone might be talking, and you will hear her say 'excuse me', and you will know that she just passed gas.  and you will pity her just a little.

      24.  sleep patterns- she sleeps deeply and dreams very little.  the booze helps.  also the   tylenol pm she takes every night.
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Welcome back! <3 and i love your character <3
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me:

1.      name: Taylor Maye Hurst

2.      age: 17 

3.      job: none but volunteers at the SPCA in martinsville VA

4.      ethnicity: white

5.      appearance: shoulder length blonde hair, blue-green eyes, 5'0, 103 pounds, and freckles across the her nose and underster her eyes.

6.      residence: lives with her 2 lesbain mothers on a farm in VA.

7.      favorite color: purple

8.      friends: Ashley, Callie, Kristina, Randy, Sarah and Brett

9.      favorite foods: chicken, shrimp and rice

10.  drinking patterns: drinks when thristy

11.  phobias: spiders, falling, and losing brett forever

12.  faults: talks about things even when it upsets herself or others, holds grudges, laughs after every sentence and constantly compares herself to her brother

13.  pets: a few cats, 4 dogs, 5 rabbits, a donkey, a horse, and 4 goats

14.  religion: scientology

15.  hobbies: singing, dancing, reading, writing and drawing

16.  single or married: single

17.  Children?: none

18.  temperament: cries easily but takes a lot to get her pissed off

19.  something hated: gay haters and peope who think there better then everyone

20.  Secrets?: none that im posting on writerscafe lol

21.  Strong memories?: none that are important

22.  Any illnesses?: asthma, carpel tunnel, and anxiety disorder

23.  Nervous gestures?: laughs after every sentece nadn bites nails

24.

1. NAME: Winford Gallington

2. AGE: No man knows.

3. OCCUPATION: Cigarrette roller

4. ETHNICITY: Indian(From india, duh. Don't know the oficial name for it though :S)

5. APPEARANCE: Has a hitler mustache, wears hawaiian shirts most of the time.

6. RESIDENCE: Someplace near New Deli.

7. FAVORITE COLOR: Beige.

8. FRIENDS: Has none but the blue bottle fly famliy that lives in his house with him (he's a budhist, he doesn't kill anything; not even flies)

9. FAVORITE FOODS: Masala Dosa, Nollen Sandesh, Pani Puri.

10. DRINKING PATTERNS: Has a glass of water every night before bed, has one every morning when he wakes up, has five to eight in between.

11.  PHOBIAS: Hippopottomonstrousquipedaliophbia (The fear of really long words, believe it or not :P)

12.  FAULTS: Cockiness, eccentricity.

13.  PETS: Blue bottle flies.

14.  RELIGION: Budhism.

15. HOBBIES: Likes to construct things out of paperclips and rubberbands.

16.  SINGLE OR MARRIED: Single(No-one would want to marry him)

17.  CHILDREN: None. Is celebate.

18.  TEMPREMENT: Tends to get infuriated when people knock on his door. He's usually in a very important stage with a rubberband-and-paperclip construction.

19.  SOMETHING HATED: He hates origami. No-one knows why.

20.  SECRETS? It is rumored he was once a terrorist.

21.  STRONG MEMORIES? He remembers once being robbed and mugged by an angry racoon.

22.  ANY ILLNESSES? Diabetes mellitus type 2

23.  NERVOUS GESTURES? He often itches his buttocks when nervous.

24.  SLEEP PATTERNS: He wakes up every night at 4:00 AM and screams like a rooster.

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15 Years Ago


Great characters everyone!
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Here's a character to a story I"m currently writing. Oh and it's set in the medieval period.

 

1.      name - Spirit

2.      age - 17-20 (ages throughout the book)

3.      job - Theif

4.      ethnicity - white

5.      appearance - She's about 5'3 in height. She has long reddish hair and blue eyes. She wears a white button down neck shirt with brown leather skirt that comes down to her mid thieghs. In her wolf form she is a silver timber wolf.

6.      residence - A broken down 2-story house in the town of Sheperdson (a town i created)

7.      favorite color - shades of blue

8.      friends - A variety of different people.

9.      favorite foods - she likes steak

10.  drinking patterns - She's not a drinker but will have one glass rarely.

11.  phobias - she's uncomfortable with falling from high places.

12.  faults - At times she can be to trushworthy. She likes to help which puts her in bad situations.

13.  pets - None

14.  religion - None, she believes all is equal

15.  hobbies - Stare at the sky, and sometimes pickpocketing the Nobles (rich people)

16.  single or married - Single

17.  Children - No

18.  temperament - ???

19.  something hated - People controling people

20.  Secrets - Her grandfather created the group that wants Spirit dead

21.  Strong memories? - Being with her guardian, Buddy

22.  Any illnesses? - Nope

23.  Nervous gestures? - She taps her fingers along her thumb when she's anxious

24.  sleep patterns - She sleeps on her side and has to be night and no sound to sleep.

 

I know it's not detailed but It

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18.  temperament - ???

a temperament is how easily someone gets upset, angry, disapointed, annoyed...ect. and the last half of you thing got cut off. <3

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I noticed...Sadly the new text editor doesn't like me, lol. Anyway the last part of what i was saying was Spirit is from my story Lycanthrope Legacy:Buried Burden. Read it when you get a chance.

Oh and her Temperment is: It takes alot to get her angry, but when she is mad she is prone to yelling at the person who made her mad. However she calms down quickly or walks away from the problem. Usually insults to her loved ones is the trigger to her anger.
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Alright ill add my character to this. Its from a fantasy book so it may be diffrent from others.  

 

Marlyne (Mar-Lin) 

17

Protecter of Haven

Of the South region of the Kingdom

Thin, Tall, White Blonde Hair, Crystal Blue Eyes.

Haven

None

Halin (Ha-Lin)

None

None

The Sight of Seeing Death of Children

Death of a Magus

None

Das Don 

None

Single

None, But watches of the children of Haven

None

None

None

Meeting Halin

None

Fingers twitching

Normal

 

Check out my book Halin to see Marlyne more clearly.