The Ink Society for Young Writers Forum Need reviews?

Post here if you would like people to review what you've written!

I've been working on a story called The Ancient Land - Goddess Cecilia's Races (which I submitted to the group) and I would really appreciate reviews on it cause it's my best work yet! It is fantasy and is really long with no dialog yet but if someone could take the time to review, I would really appreciate that.

I have the first chapter up of my first novel, Silver, and I would really like someone to tear it apart. I'd be sure to review them, if that makes any difference. It would be amazing if someone could review it :) Here's the link: