The Invincible And Humble Writers League. Forum Reviews Please

Hey everyone,

I'm pretty new to this site, and have just started writing again, so I was wondering if anyone out there would be willing to read/review my work. It's been about 10 years or so since I actually tried to write something like this, so some input would be awesome.

I'm totally willing to return any favours! Thanks.

I did view your first chapter and review it; I will see the others presently. Much work to do. ( I have children as well ) Please feel free to review my chapter, when you get the time.

Cheers.