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review my poem please

8 Years Ago


LOVE       Love is to savor, Love is to share, Love is to conquor, Love is to care.   Listen to your heart, Do so without fear, We are destined to love, All those we hold dear.

Re: review my poem please

6 Years Ago


Your poem is so true and has such meaning, and yet it was all said in such a short poem very good......

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6 Years Ago


Strong simple phrases.  I think it could be even more powerful in breaking them into shorter lines. 

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4 Years Ago


This is a short poem, but a nicely well written one as well.  I really enjoyed reading it!  Good job! :)