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"Cruel Words" by MetBySunlight: Review by Chris

10 Years Ago

You told a good story.  It has clarity, completeness, almost like reading a newpaper article.  I, as well as others, readily understood what you said.  Did I 'feel' it - no.  Understand it - yes because it isn't an uncommon story or theme, but actually FEEL the girl's hurt and frustration and desperation and motivation and other -tions?  No.  Drawing your listeners isn't easy.  How I or anyone else might express our thoughts isn't necessarily YOUR way nor even the best way, but like you each of us tries as best we can EACH time we put pen to page.  We find what works best for ourselves.   Take Care,