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13 Years Ago


How does it feel?  
How does it feel
Knowing you have a secret
Knowing you can’t tell?
Yes the secret is your own
Yes you could tell
But it’s not worth the humiliation
From those cruel people
The ones that are the fools  
 
How does it feel
Knowing you like this person
But you won’t dare tell
They sit beside you and
Your heart starts to shrill
Can’t they hear it?
It’s about to beat
Right out of your chest!  
 
How does it feel
Knowing the person that is at your side
Is the person you really like?
This person so amazing
But the world doesn’t know
This person so funny
So adorable
So…
Well you know.
 
So this is what I want
You to do
Tell me
How does it feel?