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Review my chapters 10-19

5 Years Ago


I've been working on a book titled The Sun's Rebirth for quite a while now. While working on chapter 9, I took a very long break, and when I began writing again, my chapters didn't get nearly as much views as they did beforehand. If anyone were to read or review my work, I would greatly appreciate it.

In case you're interested, here's some info on the book.
I'm currently on Ch. 20, but only have up to Ch. 19 posted. 
There i about 2000-3500 words per chapter.
My favorite chapters right now are 13, 17, and 19.

Here's some info on the plot.
6 friends(eventually 10) have to collect pieces of the Sun Relic, which will take them to the Underworld so they can defeat Daku, Lord of the Underworld. Along the way, they unlock elemental abilities and are given weapons and armor by a mysterious sensei.
The 10 heroes and their powers are:
Brenden Duden - Lightning
John Judycki - Poison
Tara Hexner - Fire
Seth Colette - Earth
Anna Ranford - Ice
Scarlett Fabbris - Wind
Drew Berry - Water
Frank Cantrell - Nature
JT Burton - Light
and the last one is a secret for now

That is all. Thank you :)
- Brenden