Writers Unite! Forum Sorry

Hey guys- sorry to feature myself, I don't mean to seem rude or like I think it's wonderful, I was just hoping for some reviews on this. If you have a piece that you want to be reviews because it has none, or you want critique, type the title below and be sure it's posted on this group.

It would be cool if someone could review my short story.. It's called The Fisherman, and I posted it on here already.