j.r.

j.r.

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About Me

hello! :0) i'm a 31 year old poet from arkansas originally, but now live in alaska. i enjoy writing [obviously ;0P], reading, fishing, hiking, karaoke, and just chillin' with friends.

most all of the poems i put up are in a transitory phase, so don't be afraid to give constructive critique. i love to hear the ideas of others (only to steal their idea and be proclaimed genius!) just kidding, but seriously give me some critique-- i only want the best for my poems. i'm of the opinion that my poems won't be finished until anthologized ;0)

i like to constructively critique others' works as vigorously as i attack my own, so please don't be offended if you get some lengthy ones from me from time to time. i mean no offense.

hope to see ya around.

sincerely,
jr



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Posted 10 Years Ago


Thank you for reviewing bottom of the bottle. I am thinking you are right about the second time I used fire water. You have been very helpful

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Posted 10 Years Ago


thanks for giving me the tech mistakes. I shall fix them soon.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


take pictures of you tinkering with your ol' "truck" lmao...

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Posted 10 Years Ago


hey, thank you so much for your review of 'american dream deferred'! i, too, had wanted to play with its format but hit those same roadblocks with this site! (i also had some grand ideas for my poem 'space', but... *sigh*). anyways, appreciate your input -- and i can imagine how cool my poem looked after you got your hands on it :D

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Thank you sweety for your review:) I appreciate it very much, I didn't see the typo, so thank you lol
I think you may be right about the 'a' too! Shall have a think :)
Thanks sweety
Hugs xx

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Posted 10 Years Ago


No problem love, its a wonderful poem! I can't post my entries in the group as it says you can't post your own lol Odd, but there you go lol
Have a great week sweety and congrats:)
Hugs xx

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Posted 10 Years Ago


wow, thank you for taking the time to craft such an epic review! my jaw literally dropped when i saw it! :D i think i might write a second version of the poem, incorporating your suggestions -- i especially liked your idea describing what kind of wings i was talking about (your bit about the different birds was quite entertaining too btw... i've noticed birds, flying, general themes of airiness and freedom, etc. tend to pop up in my poems a lot, so it was cool reading about that... argh, you're giving me all kinds of poetry ideas here!). also, i like what you said about the 'finally(...)free' part, so if i do write draft #2, that's definitely going in! the strippers, however, must wait for another day lol... c'est la vie! ;D

ok, just wanted to stop by and say that... sorry about your work though, hope it's not bringing you down! it was good to hear from you again -- your reviews are always very enlightening! :)

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Thank you for your wonderful review hon, I am much appreciative and shall have a think on what you suggested:) Awesome of you:)

Hope you are well, no worries about the abscence, I completely understand:) Have a good week! xx

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Posted 10 Years Ago


hey, just wanted to thank you for the 'creative poetry' invite, the group looks like it's a lot of fun. :) *raises glass* to making great art!

stay cool,
sara

p.s. i would also like to agree with annette and say your playlist is awesome... i love nirvana ;)

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Thank you for your lovely feedback sweety, I see what you mean, Its a challenge to really hit hard with minimal words, I usually write longer pieces I guess lol More like prose, good to have a change of direction though lol I shall have a think about your feedback love, much appreciated, thank you:) Hugs xx