mmoore20

mmoore20

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Go make some new disaster, That’s what I’m counting on, You’re someone else’s problem, Now I only want you gone

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Lullaby Lullaby

A Poem by mmoore20
My Forever My Forever

A Poem by mmoore20
Days Days

A Poem by mmoore20
Game Time Game Time

A Poem by mmoore20
Memory Memory

A Poem by mmoore20
Seasons Seasons

A Poem by mmoore20
Selfish Selfish

A Story by mmoore20
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Please read and review, I'd really like the feed back to improve my writing. And grammatical, spelling, or other errors, please let me know. Thank you!

“Stephen kissed me in the spring,
Robin in the fall,
But Colin only looked at me
And never kissed at all.
Stephen’s kiss was lost in jest,
Robin’s lost in play,
But the kiss in Colin’s eyes
Haunts me night and day.”
― Sara Teasdale, The Collected Poems

"Oh, I thought that I could change you
Oh, I thought that we would be the greatest story that I tell
I know that it's time to tell you it's over
But I don't wanna love somebody else"
-A Great Big World 'I Don't Want to Love Somebody Else'


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Posted 10 Years Ago


glad you liked it. I wanted to do something a little different with fireflies than the usual.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


thank you so much for reviewing, truly apreciate it :)

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Thank you. The only way to hit the feeling from many angles was to stretch the vocab!

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Posted 11 Years Ago


thank you for your fun review and friend request~ =)~
Selene

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I felt a rant coming and well, I guess it came!

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Thanks for adding me and all the reviews.
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