DayDreamin' And I'm Thinkin' of You

DayDreamin' And I'm Thinkin' of You

A Poem by sivan

I sit all day and think about her,

I write love poems that I

Never give to her like,

Love is how beautiful she looked

In her vest so black,

Kneeling on my bedroom floor,

Her dreads loose upon her back


I sit all day and look at the pictures we posed;

I smile at the way she sometimes wrinkles her nose

And love is how we

Took a shower the other day

And she

Washed my hair for me.


I sit all day and wonder whether she'd like the way I wore my hair

Or the pants that I'm wearing.

I wonder too if she's looking so good that

people are staring.

And love is the way she lay on my chest when she was ill

And she looked up at me and said

"I must seem like such a big baby".


I sit all day and dream of a future with her

Like if I get that job in Jozi would she

Come along or would she prefer to stay

And be close to her moms'.

And if that were it I'd be down every weekend

Cause' I can't stand

To be away from her that long.


And love is the way she gets a kick out of Jimmi Hendrix

And love is the way her dreads get in my mouth when we kiss

And love is the way she kisses my forehead in bed

And love is the way I can never stay mad.


Love is the way I cannot look in her eyes and lie.

I sit all day and my dreams never dry

Never looking at the passing of time...

And Love

Is how I'll love her till I die.

© 2013 sivan

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Such wonderful words of love.She would be glad to read your poem about her ,anyone would it is lovely:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


9 Years Ago

Thanks... I do wish that were the case
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Beautifully written. You put love into words and made them breath. She is very lucky to have you in her life.

Posted 9 Years Ago


9 Years Ago

Its a pity she no longer realises

9 Years Ago

I am so sorry to hear that. I know how that feels.
there's a very lucky girl out there, beautiful honest scribe...

Posted 9 Years Ago


9 Years Ago

thanks a lot
I really loved this poem honestly! It actually made me say "Awww" out loud! This is soooo beautifully penned! She is a very lucky gal (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


9 Years Ago

thanks... bashful much... :)

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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4 Reviews
Added on September 3, 2013
Last Updated on September 3, 2013



Durban, South Africa

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