Colour

Colour

A Poem by sivan

I've got

Red

Fire in my veins

 

I've got

Orange

Says we can't be friends

 

I've got

Yellow

Diseased with sin

 

I've got

Green

When I see you with him

 

I've got

Blue

Says it must be true

 

I've got

Purple

When I still want you

 

I've got

Violet

Scarring my skin

 

I've got

Colours

For everything.

© 2011 sivan


Author's Note

sivan
This was just a piece of requires work on colour. It is written so the second line of each stanza is a colour and the third line of each stanza forms a poem with the others.

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lovely~artistic use of colors on the poet's heart canvas~

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Simply brillant and outstanding;
I love this. Nicely written.

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. beautifully written ...
. you've mastered brevity ...
. flows beautifully ... beginning to end ...

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sivan
sivan

Durban, South Africa



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