I love you!!

This is to my bestfriend... who is dating some w***e!

I love how you

Think she cares

I love how you

Dont see shes playing you

I love how you

Still dont know

That I love you

And have for 3 years

You say were bestfriends

Nothimg more

Because your in love

With a brain washing w***e!

I want you to be happy

So thats why I dont say anything

I want to tell you

That I love you

But I cant risk

To loose are friendship

You mean so much to me

It drives me insane!

***** I love you

And you should be with me

Instead of that w***e

Whos probally sleeping

With your bestfriend next door.

Author's Note

Ignore grammer, Never was good at it anywaysXD

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great tempo and the line 'Instead of that w***e Whos probally sleeping With your bestfriend next door'

That would make it...... you know who and who..... lol

Awesome write enjoyed so much:)

[joshua deathdealer]

Awesome expression and good rhythm.

[stars are far]

i loved this a lot
it is really like a nice message that i need to send
well written
great work

[CharlesMonroe]

I loved this the first time I heard it and I love it even more now.
I can really relate to it, and you can feel your emotion in the poem. Amazing job

[Daytonight]

Really good write. Great rhyme and flow. So hard to watch someone you love doing something that is totally wrong for them. Keep on penning.

[.......]

I am so sorry this happened.
I can feel this write.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good write. Sometimes people don't like to listen. And losing a friend is always hard on a person. The grammar is pretty decent. Thanks for sharing.