He's there And I'm Coming

The second part to I know He's there

He’s There And I’m Coming

I know that slug is with you drooling with such lust

unable to penetrate you when we were together due to trust

Now I start my journey with blood boiling and intent

murder this sadistic slug so my anger I can vent 

I arrive at the door I see her stood behind

“go out through the back” to him she says

I’m not stupid I’m not blind 

I know he will be waiting until I go inside

why is she saving him? his best option is to hide

I want answers don’t give me lies

I stare with anger into her frightened eyes

I see into her eyes…….

I see into those deep blue eyes…….

those eyes which were once loving

 those eyes which once did care

F**k it get a grip you know he is right there

Pushing the door with such a force a shock upon his face

my fist connects with his jaw satisfied that I’ve put him in his place

I turn to leave when he shouts “She was great!” 

Now I see red he has sealed his fate 

I turn and thrust my knee to his face 

bludgeoning him 

His teeth are removed and iron he must taste 

I Lift his head by his hair as I throw a devilish right

blackening one eye impairing his sight 

She stands there and watches like she doesn’t even care

My damage is done her complexion so fair

“I’ve never seen you so violent” she says with detest

I turn to him stamping with full force on his chest

“You broke my heart and now I’ve caused you some pain”

deep in her mind she knows she is to blame

I look into those eyes and I really couldn’t care

I now don’t give a f**k if he is there   

Author's Note

The second part the not so fairytale ending come on i'm Ashley Black Not Ashley happily Ever After
please give honest reviews as always

Reviews

[Belle Antimatter]

this is beautiful^^ i can really feel her stare...smell his blood. Wonderful job. I cant rhyme to save my life.

[jessica Wray]

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[howlfjdks]

This is a short story, poem, flick all wrapped into one I pictured everything excellently and after I read it I felt intense excellent conclusion.

[northern monkey]

Beautiful lyrical work - you're a great story-teller. Has your trademark emotional intensity in spades - so sympathised with the rage, despite abhorring the violence. Mind you, if someone threatened my son.........

[Samantha (:]

You can feel this poem. You're such a talented writer. I'm jealous.

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

I like it alot :p

[cfix]

Wow this is powerful
so well written.

[trainwreck]

Intense. Dangerous. And still well-crafted. Good job.

[Ashley Myers]

wow i feel the anger. i hope i never have to experience this from his perspective. i might be a girl but if i ever caught my spouse cheating on me you better believe id open a can of whoop a*s!

[Labtoad]

This. Is. Powerful. I respect your honesty in the writing..and that's why we're all here, isn't it? To feel something and help others feel it, as well? I cringed but kept reading...I'd say you did your job well.