The Alleyway

once again pushing the barriers writing what people avoid

The Ally

Demonic pathways demanding lust

lonely walker breaking trust

buying drinks all to subdue

Rohypnol added or a few

I saw her teasing, dancing all night

gazing at me, frivolous spite

now the upper hand is mine 

spiked drink take your swigs of wine

Following you home the darkest of night

no people to accompany you to my delight

run up behind a found hammer in hand

blow to your head over your body I stand

undress you while your dazed and confused

your frail little body ready to be abused

“tease me will you , seduce me all night

c**k teasing w***e you will remember tonight”

slowly coming round she screams in my face

constrict her breathing her arms all over the place

deeper and deeper I feel myself drawing near

The look in her eyes of pain and fear

reach my climax above her I now stand

“please” she begs reaching out her hand

I pull out a knife once hidden from view

press its cold metal to her throat

“you won’t say a word if you know what’s good for you”

leaving her crying in pain and alone

This dark alleyway she sits an unemotional drone 

Author's Note

Another poem that rarely uses the subject matter I have embraced
Again I know its a hard poem to read but if you get through it I appreciate your feedback

thank you for reading And sorry in advance if anyone has suffered from this abuse

Reviews

[Shelby]

Dark and appropriately ugly. This is such a sensitive subject, but you capture the need of the rapist to overpower their quarry vey well. I don't know if this is a compliment in the traditional sense, but you enter the mind of your subject and create a believable circumstance and I was impressed at how you portrayed these two people in such a realistic, honest light. As a storyteller, you are a master, and I'm glad to see you don't really feel this way, because I liked that you told it from the viewpoint of the monster, and did it well. It was dark and an uncomfortable subject matter for most people, but you did it with just the right amount of restraint, never straying toofar over the line and keeping a respectful distance from describing the gritty details unnecessarily. Some people drown their dark poem in overwhelming details that can make things uncomfortably real, but youdrew a line between art and perversity. Well done and thank you for sharing.

[Ruth]

Well, love, I think to touch territory like this is brave! And its a great piece, poetry needs to be explored, and that is the beauty of words....we can imagine! I like the poem a lot, ok, subject matter, intense lol But, it works well sweetheart!

Hugs xx

[Rose Masen]

This touched on many things. I think it could be used as a healing piece- I know, I think very differently- but honestly the flow was flawless and the words held such profound emotion.

[Ashley Myers]

dark, and disgusting. but well written lol

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

Well i loved this piece very well written
it was interesting how you worded everything

100/100

[Midday_Mystery]

umm This was a good poem ashley but not my genre... God bless you

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

wow another surprising write makes me wonder what provoked these poems that took an even darker turn? On the other hand I agree with Jonathan's review
Well written and a good read

[poems with feeling]

WOW!!!!!!!!!! so mush HONEST. i like this side of your writeing, it feel like your a crying out for help, but let you want to be left alone becaues you dont know how to deal with it your self, and you want to fight it out for your self before anyone else trys to help. i hope to see more poems like this from you. ^.^

[Apathy To Empathy]

It sucks to go through pain...BUt I enjoyed your understanding! Great write!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

another very horrific subject, but its a dark reality. the poem was written very well, it gave me chills and truly disturbed me. sad, but nice job