Once Upon A Winters Night

Once Upon A Winters Night

A Poem by ~ Czarina Iris ~
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I wrote this December 10th as a way to express my feelings without waking the whole town the night before. I'm attempting to turn it into a song.

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Once upon a winters night

There was only you and me

The world around is faded

You were all that I could see

Once upon a winters night

All my dreams came true

Because once upon that winters night

I fell in love with you.

© 2010 ~ Czarina Iris ~


Author's Note

~ Czarina Iris ~
Sorry it took so long to get up. I attemtped it at Christmas, but my laptop was acting up.

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This is very nice! I love your writings! You're very good considering all things! And you're only 14... WOW! No... I think you have an extreme sense of tallent and ability inside you though. Your poems are free and expressive and I'm getting and idea from reading your stuff that you have a strong passion for writing and creativity. Am I right? Well anyway... great flow and rhythem. I enjoyed reading this one as well!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I loved this! I could hear a melody in my head as I read this. The flow was amazing. I also loved the rhythm. This was a very nice piece all around. I think this would be an amazing song for children. That's what I believe. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


sweet and simple and so very cute. it made me smile :))
nicely done :)



Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice expression of the emotion for love.

Posted 12 Years Ago


great job, love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow. This is really good! I love the rhythem to it, and your ryming was absolutely perfect. I really love this. Very good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very nice! I love your writings! You're very good considering all things! And you're only 14... WOW! No... I think you have an extreme sense of tallent and ability inside you though. Your poems are free and expressive and I'm getting and idea from reading your stuff that you have a strong passion for writing and creativity. Am I right? Well anyway... great flow and rhythem. I enjoyed reading this one as well!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, sweet and very nice. I enjoyed it. It was a nice break from my deep angsty poems I've been reading. [laughs]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 8, 2010
Last Updated on August 10, 2010
Tags: Once, Upon, A, Winters, Night, poem, poetry, snow, love, romance

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~ Czarina Iris ~
~ Czarina Iris ~

Where the sea meets the sky, Canada



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"Let me not to the marriage of true minds Admit impediments, love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove: O no! it is an ever-fixèd mark Tha.. more..

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