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A Poem by ~ Czarina Iris ~

The beauty of our Mother Earth

Forced into shadows, made to hide

Tell me now, what was her worth

When alone, in darkness, she died

© 2012 ~ Czarina Iris ~

Author's Note

Quick poem written in my writing class yesterday. We were given a piece of music to listen to (look for mood, atmosphere, etc...) and to write a small poem based on what we felt it was about. This is what I came up with.
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Periac

BAM!

you just to the reader on a very fine moral train wreck and i’m left applauding

brilliant

Posted 6 Years Ago

TC Dunn

wow… so sad… oh makes you really think about what we're doing to nature. Beautifully constructed and wonderful message.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Tate Morgan

maybe Terra would be more appropriate fior the title

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

A strong poem. I would use the words "Mother Earth" as the title. You said a lot of truth in this short poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 7, 2012
Last Updated on February 7, 2012

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~ Czarina Iris ~

Where the sea meets the sky, Canada

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