Evil and darkness

Evil and darkness

A Chapter by Ashley.M.E

The vivid hairs

Of a darkened smile

Casts its shade

Over the sun

 

The day is over

The day is done

With no return

We all must run

 

For shadows are everywhere

The darkness taking over

We find we are lost

In the pit of despair

 

This place we once loved

This place was once our home

Is now just cold dust

Swallowed by unfortunate luck

 

We find we are stuck

Trapped just to watch

Our eyes can’t look away

From the disaster they made

 

For no more noise

The silence echoes

Everything falls

Without a sound

 

For if one cried

No one could hear

For they all are now statues

Waiting for the end

 

Evil has come

It will never leave

Taking all souls

Good, evil, misunderstood

 

No one is left

The world sits alone

The day will never come

We’re all stuck in the cold

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The flow could use a little work but I really liked the content of this poem. Dark, desperate, solemn, very nice. Good commentary with the "This place we once loved / This place was once our home / Is now just cold dust". I liked that part. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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The flow could use a little work but I really liked the content of this poem. Dark, desperate, solemn, very nice. Good commentary with the "This place we once loved / This place was once our home / Is now just cold dust". I liked that part. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write. I liked it a lot. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


thank you all so much for your reviews

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is really good. very emotional. great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was deep. I loved the emotion. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


deep and emotional i loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago


very well i like it i find this poem about death the day we die and it put the emotion on roll for the reader and i realy like it good job keep writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


A powerful poem. It is based on a sad topic of a world falling into evil and coldness. Better to go out swinging then die like a lamb. I like the feel and emotion of this poem. A outstanding poem. You made me think.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is really aweosme and i love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a great piece. The gloomy tone adds to the effect of evil and darkness; this piece goes pretty deep into that realm, too. Sounds like an apocalyptic theme...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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