I'll just leave

Give me a reason for what you do

I have no clue I just can’t understand you

Maybe it’s not meant to be

Maybe I was a fool for wasting all this time

Is it a crime to be in love with you

Because you seem to think it is

For how can you be mad at me

For wanting to give you all of me

You seem to think I’m the fool

For maybe once you’re just cruel

You can not see what I can be

For all I think is maybe it’s true

That I should have never fallen for you

But no I believe it’s to late for me

For I can’t seem to leave

What can I do to make you see

That all I need is somebody

And for the one I want you

But you can’t seem to believe

That I actually care.

It is your lose if you don’t believe

Because I know what you need

If you don’t want me

Then I’ll just leave.

 

@All rights reserved by Ashley.M.E.

Reviews

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Ohhhh...The ending is so sad. To be in love with someone and they don't care about you back, so you leave them...Yeah, I know how that feels all too well...I really really liked it.

[PJ Stevens]

We all relate to this in one way or another. It's a common thing to write about, and everyone captures it differently. This poem seems to stand out from the rest, it really shows feeling and depth when talking about what happened between you and this person (Friend? Boyfriend?). The lack of a regular rhyme pattern emphasizes the meaning to this poem. It really is well written and an excellent piece of work.

[Kat Plunkett]

ughh i know the feeling.
we can all relate to this.
really good.:)

[the_stoic]

hmm.. another write with the theme that usually comes up .. well all i would like to say is if you do love that guy keep loving him regardless of what he does . sooner or later he'll realize . true love takes some time . keep fighting . even if in the end if he doesn't come back to you , you'll be proud of the fact that you loved someone with all your heart (that's quite unlike others) !

nice write