A hug (sort of copied Kanattas Atir Enomo's poem Word Merge

A hug (sort of copied Kanattas Atir Enomo's poem Word Merge

A Chapter by Ashley.M.E

In a place where hope is lost


Lost is never found

Found is never forgotten

Forgotten is meaningless


Meaningless in nothing


Nothing is everything

Everything is forbidden

Forbidden is killing


Killing means blood

Blood means lives

Lives means death

Death means graves

Graves mean heaven

Heaven means hope


Hope needs a place


Place is a home

Home is a family


Family means love

Love means embrace

Embrace means a hug

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© 2010 Ashley.M.E

Author's Note

hope you don't mind Kanattas Atir Enomo's

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very simple and sweet! loved it

Posted 10 Years Ago

haha rita doesn't mind at all. in fact i really like it. yours actually has a meaning to it and it was really really good. lines 9 and 10 are my favorite. you took a simple idea and turned into something amazing. great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute write. I liked it. :O
Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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I love this. It's sweet. :)

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Added on June 13, 2010
Last Updated on December 31, 2010




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