Loss of Love

It's impossible to describe the feelings one get after the death of a loved one as time progresses, but this is my attempt.

One hour, two hours, three hours, four.
This can't be happening, I mean, just an hour before...
Five hours, six hours, seven hours, eight.
What just happened? I can't remember the date.

One day, two days, three days, four.
Grandma died recently. That's what I came here for.
Five days, six days, seven days, eight.
I wonder how she's doing? Has she passed Heaven's gate?

One month, two months, three months, four.
I can't stop crying. Memories of you keep flooding, more and more.
Five months, six months, seven months, eight.
I'm sorry for acting so spoilt, grandma, but I guess now it's... too late.

One year, two years, three years, four.
Your death doesn't matter to me, no, not anymore.
Regardless of time, I still see your face.
You'll be in my heart forever, grandma, and remember, that's <ALWAYS>.

Author's Note

Try not to read it with rhythm; Read it SLOWLY

Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

This was a great emotional rite. I read it a little fast sorry. But uh sin? I love you but really rap? Ok I read it slowly and it kinda is better that way. I don't know how to explain it. Nice write

[......]

Deep, powerful write, Reading it slow is ike a Ballad, love it

[SeventhSin]

Sorry, but I couldn't help but reading it in a rapper's voice and making it a rap song. :) I really liked this, though. Shows real emotion!!