Guilty

Guilty

A Poem by Mz. Rosilyn Vanessa
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Just feelings of guilty

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I feel guilty when I think about you.

I feel guilty when I think about kissing and touching you.

I feel guilty when sex comes to my mind because I want it with you.

 

I'm guilty of thinking about you.

GUILTY

GUILTY

GUILTY....

© 2008 Mz. Rosilyn Vanessa


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Mz. Rosilyn Vanessa
Just be honest that's all I ask of you.

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Well, I think that those things could be said about alot of emotions other then the feelings of guilt. One could replace the word guilt and guilty with joyfull or happy, and it would still flow. It's simple to the point and gets a strong feeling across in a kinda cute way.

Thanks for writing it! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on April 3, 2008