The sky was crying

Most of teenagers spoil their life for love breakups.

The sky was crying

My eyes were also dripping

In the shade of her cloudy hair

I ruined my life without care

The greenery of tree was dark

sweet cu-ckoo of koel became sour

The future seemed in the dark

Life stopped its walk

When her presence vanished

My presence on Earth became a load

Don't know when fell from the roof

The sky was crying

My eyes were also dripping

The drops are drenching you

You are dancing like innocent kid

Author's Note

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Reviews

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Hmm....well well, this one is a bulls eye!!
Am also confused by most of the teenagers activity on love and breakup in our generation (though am also a teen)....and I've lost few friends faith on me just because I'd tried to make them understand that this is the time to build up the pottery of life and we're raw to take the weight of love and all at this time....however they get this understood while crying after breakup!!....
It's a good read, thanks for sharing☺!

[Amit]

Thanks a lot for your valuable comment...

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Welcomed☺!