Brown eyes

Brown eyes

A Poem by Nix is typing...
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A poem about a simple girl, with black hair and brown eyes.

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Just another girl with black hair

and brown eyes,

Never seems to be noticed by the other 

Guys

Insecure and always feeling

Alone

Wondering if my heart will ever find 

A home



Wishing, wanting, waiting

For someone to notice

Me

The invisible girl 

With black hair

And brown eyes

You see?



I just want someone

To listen to me

I just want someone

To say they love me

I just want someone

Who doesn't drool over a blonde

I just want someone

Who can correspond

With my thoughts

Someone

Who likes brown eyes

I just want someone tall

Someone that'll listen

And that says it all



I have brown eyes

And black hair

I'll look in the mirror

And think

"Who's she?"

"Who's that ugly girl staring back at me?"

"Oh, wait, that's me."

You know,

I've been told that I'm pretty

I've been told that I'm "thick"

But then my brain'll fight with my heart

And they like to start a major conflict



I can't control what goes on in someone's head

But I'm just a girl with black hair

Black, not red

I can't control whether or not I have dimples

But I have brown eyes,

Yeah, plain and simple

Invisible

I'm just a girl

With black hair

and brown eyes


© 2021 Nix is typing...


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You are a girl who is so pretty and who will soon find the one

Posted 5 Days Ago


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5 Days Ago

That is so sweet! Thanks for your review, Cassie!! ❤️
That was wonderful! I love your rhyming in this one!
Very nice!
I totally know how you feel about being noticed.
Can't wait to read more!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Nix is typing...

1 Week Ago

Thanks for this review! I'm glad you could relate.
I don't know. From the photo. You look wonderful to me.
"I'm just a girl
With black hair
and brown eyes"
I liked the honest tone to the world. I like being left alone. Attention is hard work. Thank you dear poet for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


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1 Week Ago

Thanks for the compliment, Coyote! I like to keep my poems real, I like to keep them relatable. :) T.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Days Ago

I tried to. Also. We must ensure our words can be understood. You are welcome dear poet.
I read this yesterday but my response got lost in the ether. The site is playing up. Anyway, I came back for seconds and to say I thought you expressed your emotions well in your poem. You know, I don't like mirrors either.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


Nix is typing...

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for your review, Chris!
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Week Ago

Pleased to meet you Nix. Keep typing and writing :)
Nix is typing...

1 Week Ago

Aw, thank you! Pleasure meeting you, too! And thanks I will, and I am :) Yes ma'am!
Simply being female is a huge advantage in the dating game. If you have enough patience to ignore the jerks, online dating can lead to some pretty amazing experiences.

“Whenever women have insisted on absolute equality with men, they have invariably wound up with the dirty end of the stick. What they are and what they can do makes them superior to men, and their proper tactic is to demand special privileges, all the traffic will bear. They should never settle merely for equality. For women, 'equality' is a disaster.”
― Robert A. Heinlein

Posted 1 Week Ago


Hair color has nothing to do with it, personality rules it all. Also being shy doesn't help.
I was really shy growing up and i never spoke to anyone. I was the Basket case like you see
in the Breakfast Club movie. I was a weirdo.

One day I just snapped and said no more.
I came out of my shell, took a few adult classes along with speech and drama and well
that got me out of my shell really fast. I found out I had talent from my drama teacher,
now I act in plays here in town. I love it. Hang in there it will get better.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Nix is typing...

1 Week Ago

Well, that totally, completely describes me, I'm super shy until I warm up to a person (that complet.. read more
From one brown eyed girl to another - the shade of our eyes is TERRIBLY underrated and I'm angry at society for creating standards in which brown eyes and dark hair aren't deemed beautiful. BECAUSE THEY ARE! And you're beautiful! And so are your soul and talent! Keep your chin up lady - you're a brilliant f*****g poet!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Nix is typing...

1 Week Ago

I agree, Marija, the shade of our eyes really is extremely underrated. Lol, I think I might love thi.. read more
Just Kim

1 Week Ago

least burnette's get took seriously. I am a blond people automatically think I am a ding bat... LOL
Nix is typing...

1 Week Ago

Lol well, it's the whole stereotype thing, isn't it? People automatically assuming things about peop.. read more
This is just being a girl lol
especially a young girl, I think.
I'm still pretty young too, and I sometimes still feel like this.
I think it's something we will grow out of lol I hope.

I see you. I think you're pretty incredible and strong. Keep being who you are and keep writing.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Nix is typing...

1 Week Ago

I hope we grow out of it too, the life of a teenager seems to be full of insecurities which suck, ma.. read more
light and ashes

1 Week Ago

You're very young, which is not a bad thing. It's actually a good thing.
So beautifully written bestie! You have quite a talent of conveying honestly through poetry, and it's great to see people being real. The world we live in wants us to fake it and just smile cause that's right, but these are deep thoughts that we all often wonder. Quite relatable, and beautiful :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


Nix is typing...

1 Week Ago

Awww, thank you bestie! Yk my whole, "being real" quality is one of the reasons we're best friends �.. read more
Great poem. This says a lot about how you see yourself, and how you believe other see you.
To me, there is a person out there for everyone. So, I have no doubt that your heart "will find a home" one day.
Thanks for Sharing=-)

Posted 1 Week Ago


Nix is typing...

1 Week Ago

Thanks so much for your review! :)
Someday I hope I'll find someone out there who'll apprecia.. read more
Audie G. Couch

1 Week Ago

Your welcome, and I agree.

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