Searching...

Searching. But For What?
Near Downtown, The Streets Are Clear
Umbrella And I

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like to wander myself. I enjoyed this poem. A perfect open ending. Thank you dear Anastasia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[duff]

You have the haiku on lock down. I think it's pretty neat how just a few lines can send your brain into a warped speed of thought. There can't be any wasted words and you never do. Peeling back the layers in your poetry is fun.

[Stacy Purvis]

True dat. I think I'm going to go on a limerick streak now...lol. Who knows?

[duff]

Do it, haha!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Plaintive soliloquy, or exciting search for....? Lovely Haiku form. "Umbrella and I"-partners in crime! Very well-written!

[Jessica Lima]

You described my whole life in a few words. Sometimes I just feel so empty. I'm looking for something in others, in things, everywhere... but always come up empty. At the same time I know I've turned my back on God. He has helped me so much, but I can't find the strength to turn around and look at him. The weight of my sin, the shame, keeps me searching for his love in every other place but his arms.