Cereal Killer

Cereal Killer

A Poem by 20 Locks - Hustla Extraordinaire

Cereal Killer
In Darkness He Plays Until
The Bowl Is Empty 🥄

© 2018 20 Locks - Hustla Extraordinaire


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This is very witty and clever. Personally, I'm typically not a fan of haikus, but the puns and conciseness of this poem are used artfully, adding to the poem rather than retracting from it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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She or he have done,so far very clean job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


what creative word playing ... the two images conjured for me so contrasting ..one a two year old with Fruit Loops" ..the other a homicidal psychopath draining blood from a victim ...well done senryu Anastasia!
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


First, this sounds like a SERIAL killer. Second, wonderful job :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sugar and Spice and Everything Dark, huh? lol

Posted 3 Years Ago


Must be all that sugar. Good one Ana

Posted 3 Years Ago


You make cereal so versatile. .... who knows what lurks in the box!

Posted 3 Years Ago


You can imagine many different things with this one. Going the sinister avenue is the fun one. I've always said you have the haiku on lock down. You never fail to impress. Great stuff.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lol - this is clever and witty. Could be a whole serial of these
Inspiring it is ...

may I...

cereal playboy
he's crazy about f**king
early morning fare


Posted 3 Years Ago


Very nice use of words. I have three cereal killers at my house. Thank you Anastasia for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on September 14, 2017
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