Kaleidoscope

Kaleidoscope

A Poem by Stacy Purvis

Like A Kaleidoscope With All It's Pretty Colors
Mezmorized By You And I Enter In
Stuck In A Moment I Can't Change Or Forget
Drowning In Our Sea Of Immaculate Sin.

© 2018 Stacy Purvis


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Short. Yet the message come through beautifully.
Great write

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like the phrase 'immaculate sin.' This poem is quite punchy too.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This one attracts! I can soooo appreciate "a mid-step pause".

Posted 3 Years Ago


Quick question. Is the capitalization stylistic? If it is, that puts a neat spin on the emotion of the poem. I like the brevity of the poem, and it conveys such tremulous joy.

Posted 3 Years Ago


oh my...dynamic tension at its best Stacy .. in so few words for me you create the potential for great tragedy or great love ... closing line is so well done says i!
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Another Beautiful Write Keep'em coming .Thank You!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love the analogy. The sin I can do without, lol.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Nice use of words. I liked how you twisted the words to a meaningful poem. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Creatively and wonderfully written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Isnt love a kaleidescope of colours. Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on December 20, 2018
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Stacy Purvis
Stacy Purvis

Columbus, OH



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Altruistic Enigmatic Polymath | Writer, Poet, Actress, Musician, EMT. I'm an Artist. I paint pictures of the verbal kind. ☯ 333 more..

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