End Of The Beginning

End Of The Beginning

A Poem by 20 Locks - Hustla Extraordinaire

You're Dead to me
Like the Death you await
The Darkness in your Soul
Empty carcass on the Cold,
Hard ground, Lost not Found
Much like this Slap of Reality
In Your face

© 2019 20 Locks - Hustla Extraordinaire

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Ouch. I pity the next poor person that meets that character. They're obviously not worth the time put into a relationship. Sorry for the recipient's woes and glad they could just say 'good riddance'.

Posted 11 Months Ago

I was channeling someone’s bitter outrage. 😂😂😂 Sorry...damn, it’s good though.

Posted 1 Year Ago

wow ... each line a strong straight right to the gut ...this is a relationship unbalanced .. when one gives all and the other takes with disregard ... to ignite such a powerful response ... the closing is so final ..no glimmer of the protagonist finding peace yet ... but i am the obstinate optimist ... this fiery anger will abate .. one can let it go and move on ... its a choice after a point i think .. once that fire dims a bit ;)what a scene and inspired setting .. your open endedness in that let me put her in a place of my own imaginations ... but her soliloquy is crystal clear .. whew .. glad it not me she speaks of :}

Posted 1 Year Ago

Just a hint of anger here... I do hope the "cause" justifies the resultant 'tudes. Wasting a good anger is a terrible thing.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Sounds like a romance ended poorly
Unfortunately, not a rare occurrence

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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5 Reviews
Added on March 27, 2019
Last Updated on March 27, 2019
Tags: end, death, carcass, lies, darkness, dark, xosassystacexo


20 Locks - Hustla Extraordinaire
20 Locks - Hustla Extraordinaire

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