roes are red

roes are red

A Poem by 25syd25

roes are red 
violets are blue 
i see to love 
your kisses

roes are red 
violets are blue
i cant stop
seeing you

rose are red 
violets are blue
i wont stop 
seeing you

roes are red
violets are blue 
the world will stop 
when you die

so i love you good bye

© 2012 25syd25


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cute... reminds me of that song that says "She stopped loving me today..." Interesting premise, but what happens if there is an afterlife? Not saying there is one, but what if? --lol In my opinion (IMO), your phrase "The world will stop" will sound stronger in this write as "My world will stop"...IMO.... Nice work, I like your emphasis of points using colors (red for roses, blue for good bye), very creative. Thanks.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The first stanza honestly confused me. Everything else was really good and has a great flow and rhyme with it. I love the last line, it is my favorite thing about this poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


gives some really neat imagery. I keep trying to think of a backstory to all this, and its an inspiration.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cute... reminds me of that song that says "She stopped loving me today..." Interesting premise, but what happens if there is an afterlife? Not saying there is one, but what if? --lol In my opinion (IMO), your phrase "The world will stop" will sound stronger in this write as "My world will stop"...IMO.... Nice work, I like your emphasis of points using colors (red for roses, blue for good bye), very creative. Thanks.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very nice love poem; says so much...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww. this was so cute

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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