marathon

marathon

A Poem by annie lee

she dreams of dead babies


that he has forgotten.


he walks ahead,


his stride too long


for her to keep pace.


for him what is past


is past,


never again to be acknowledged.


she cannot leave the past.


it will be on her back


forever.


he is blind to the stones,


the darts,


the impediments


thrown up in their path.


she is not.


she shrieks


“I will not have this!


I will not submit!”


as she pounds her bloody fists


into the earth.


yet


she is still to be


found


here


on this pockmarked path.

 

 

© 2014 annie lee


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DrD
It is strange how the insensitivity of one person can heighten the sensitivity of another. This work can be applied to so many situations but what comes to mind immediately for me is what the wives of Nazi war criminals must have felt. "What is past is past" is the theme heard from all of them and yet the suffering continues in its own way. I truly enjoyed this one.

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DrD
It is strange how the insensitivity of one person can heighten the sensitivity of another. This work can be applied to so many situations but what comes to mind immediately for me is what the wives of Nazi war criminals must have felt. "What is past is past" is the theme heard from all of them and yet the suffering continues in its own way. I truly enjoyed this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A marathon on pockmarked stones of the past...Brilliant...:)...........

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is brilliant. What is past is not necessarily so, nor does it need to be.:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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