To Feel

To love you must hope,

But what is that when you're covered in dope,

To be free you must see,

To all the world and it's needs,

I can't believe you're gone,

To feel in that bound,

Why must have you go,

Did you feel low?

I will pick you up,

Cause to feel you don't drink from a cup,

Be happy in your skin,

Don't hide lonely in that bin,

To feel you will see,

All the love in me.

Reviews

[The Black Warrior]

Nicely done, very elegnat and sweet!

Thank you for sharing~

~Suk

[Emmy Cannon]

You're very welcome. Hopefully you read more.

[The Black Warrior]

I sure will! :P

[Jeffrey David]

Very nice piece of work. I really get a sense of emotion from it. I really like the opening line "To love you must hope"

[Emmy Cannon]

Thank you very much :) I hope you read more.