The Seven Sisters

The Seven Sisters

A Story by Eidolon Michael
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Just a good morale story I came up with in Math.

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Once upon a time there were seven sisters.

They all argued frantically so thier mother said" Fight like this and you'll turn old.Fight not at all and you will be rewarded.

However,the sisters did not heed this warning and continued fighting for almost three months endlessly.

On the oldest sister's sixteenth birthday,she woke with a scream.

"My face,my face!"she shrieked.

The others saw her and panicked.They too had wrinkled faces,just like the older one.

"You should have heeded my warning,"the mother said and to this day the sisters never argue...

But the damage is done.

© 2009 Eidolon Michael


Author's Note

Eidolon Michael
A really short morale story that probably isn't really worth much of anything. But I figured I might as well edit it, so here ya go ^_^

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Interesting. It's short, but...it isn't too bad. Kind of reminds me of an Aesop's fable. Did you choose seven (sisters) and three (months) on purpose?

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked it. Its cute.

By the way i always did my best drawings in Math class ; )

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha...maybe I shouldn't fight with my brother then...hmmm, can't help it he's just so annoying!
cute story, i liked it!
:) ear

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Posted 15 Years Ago


You write really good short stories. You should publish a book of a whole bunch of short stories.

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Posted 15 Years Ago



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Eidolon Michael
Eidolon Michael

The Gates of Zonei, TX



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My name is Michael and I am 18 years old. I'm a pretty nice guy(mostly) but if I don't like you, I'll tell you so,yeah.I'm really short for a guy (5ft, 6in.) and I'm pretty average weight(125lbs).. more..

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