finally clear...✫✫✫✫❥❥❥❥❥❥❥❥

finally clear...✫✫✫✫❥❥❥❥❥❥❥❥

A Poem by Rayree Parker
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sometimes truths are painful to realize

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my heart pleading with me in silents
to stop letting you inflict it with your selfish violence
its finally clear its been my choice to buy in to your
lying voice....
here i sit once again twisted up turned around where do i begin?
finally its so clear to see that you never really gave a f**k about me  
 

© 2013 Rayree Parker


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your work describes very well that many times a person we loved the most deserves our hatred and nothing and that hatred we cant give him.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sometimes it takes distance to realize that the one who you thought you loved is a piece of s**t and not worth your time... well said Rayree

Posted 6 Years Ago


I can really relate to this kido you did a very good job on this :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


It hurts when someone you really cared about stops caring. I can relate to this feeling of pain.
Good thing about your writing is that you do not hide your feelings.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Clear and straight forward and very relatable - How great writing should be! I can feel the emotion. Great job, my friend!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh my gosh, I love this, it's so true

Posted 6 Years Ago


Always hard when this is the situation, we cope the best we can and we do one day stand up and say, you know what? Enough is enough...x

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rayree Parker

6 Years Ago

yep ....true story!.. you said it sista enough is enough we hit r breaking point TY for your re.. read more
Ruth

6 Years Ago

My pleasure hon and thank you too! x
WOW! Love this...soooo full of emotion and truth! Admitting the ugly truth can be one of the hardest things we do but also one of the strongest.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rayree Parker

6 Years Ago

TY yea painful yet healing.... eventually lol

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Rayree Parker
Rayree Parker

the coast that shall not be named.... , CA



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I watch the world and it seems to flow out on to paper without a choice ... And yes..,it may or may not could have been bout u if it sounds familiar maybe our paths met ?even just for a second? .. I w.. more..

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