My child

My child

A Poem by V.J.C.

 
 
Tenderly,
I look upon you.
so innocent,
of this darkened world.

Your cry,
resonates throughout me.
 burdens heavy,
I carry for you.

Harsh world lightened,
by your care free smile.
gently kissing you upon the cheek,
world brightens for a moment.

weights of life,
lift with the sight of you.
For my love so freely given,
I will protect you always my child.

© 2012 V.J.C.


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I love poetry about the love of a child. I can actually imagine my own kids as I read this...kissing them softly upon their little pillow cheeks that feel like plushy marshmallows. I imagine holding them as they sleep, probably one of the most comforting moments of being a parent. Nothing beats the feeling of having a child fall asleep upon you. You never stop being a parent, either. Even after they turn 18 and are out the door. That's what resonates with me about this poem: the last line. 'I will protect you always my child.' because there is no doubt within my mind that a parent will always parent their child, even when they grow up.

Posted 5 Years Ago


this is a beautiful little poem. There is something indescribable about children - especially when we are new parents.

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is great...a great promise to a child.

Posted 6 Years Ago


terrific poem that encapsulates the feeling of parenthood perfectly

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is so true at what children can do... good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


So sweet and touching. A child can bring so much light into a dark world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


nicely done. I love how every interaction with the baby brightens an otherwise darkened world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful and full of emotion. Excellent job capturing the love of mother for child! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


The beautiful bond between mother and child is well expressed here. This poem radiates love and nuturing and the desire to protect our children from what can be a very dark world. Nicely written!

Posted 7 Years Ago


beautiful little expression of love and hope. nicely done.


Posted 7 Years Ago



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