Betrayle

Betrayle

A Poem by vanila bean
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This poem is all about betrayle

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Betrayle is like an old friend of mind and when it greets me i comfort it

It's like a friend but in the end it is really your enemy

It pushes you over the edge

It turns you into something your not

It lives to hurt you

It feeds of of traquilty and its fuel is failure

Its like deception it plays with your brain

Its something more than what it seams

Its being betrayed by the one you love

or beind decevied by you best friend

Betrayle is fear and confusen

It plays you are an instrument

You are the fly and betrayle is the spider ready to trap you in his web ready to  pounce

Beware, betrayle is everywhere

© 2011 vanila bean


Author's Note

vanila bean
This is a poem I feel people can relate to because everyone can be decieved and hurt by comment, tell me what you would add, change and please give my feedback!
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Yes becareful betrayal is a dangerous thing. Your write is so true!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thanks glad you like it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Everyone can relate to this, and betrayle is everywhere.
Great piece.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago



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I love reading books and I love to write stories. My passion is poetry I love to read books and write stories I love to run that is my secret I seek to change the world people's mind all my life I hav.. more..

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A Poem by vanila bean