lifeless and dead

lifeless and dead

A Poem by Alfredo Quiroga

the blood drips

slowly from the 

lifeless and dead

remains of slaughtered 

frostbite, severed and

shattered inner dreams,

as I contemplate

beneath the stars

I wait patiently

for the pervading silence

of nothingness that

lurks around my solemn life.

© 2012 Alfredo Quiroga


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Tay
Deep. I love your mind.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alfredo,

I believe this is a great beginning of a great poem. I especially like the last stanza:

"I wait patiently
For the pervading silence
Of nothingness that
Lurks around my solemn life."

If you could expand on this theme I believe you will have something people will want to read. Remember: "Writers are peculiar but readers are paticular."

I appreciate your writing and believe you have potential. Keep on writing.

Sincerely,

Cecil A

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Alfredo Quiroga

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A Mexican buena and raised in Alaska, who would of thought. Well here I am. I am a very eclectic kind of guys, always willing to try new things. my main hobbies include reading writings dancing and Ha.. more..

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A Poem by Alfredo Quiroga