Autumn II

Autumn II

A Poem by Aianarie (INACTIVE)
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An annual poem for my favorite season.

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Summer’s curse has thus hardened my soul

To the conceptions lovely Spring had bestowed

I long for Autumn’s calm wind and idle thought

Untainted by reality and the dull of this world

 

As the leaves begin to fall

My paper heart strings are set

Doors to my lost world reopened

I am queen again

My people rejoice at my return

I am happy again

 

Winter fell,

And I finally thawed.

© 2012 Aianarie (INACTIVE)


Author's Note

Aianarie (INACTIVE)
Autumn is upon us, dear friends! Feel free to express your love and/or thoughts for the most contemplative of seasons in the comments below. :-)

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Great thought evoking write

Posted 6 Years Ago


This poem was wonderful. I liked the imagery. Beginnings are always refreshing. A matter to the mind and to the soul. Great work! Nicely-penned. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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So colourful! with fine imagery and phrasing. Well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dear Aianarie,

I love autumn so I just had to read this. I loved it up until the last lines, which I just didn't understand. I feel like those lines should be somewhere in the first stanza and just end it with I am happy again. Other than that, I just loved everything about this poem. I especially loved the second stanza where autumn gives way to inspiration. Just awesome straight 100.

Cool write. Thanks for sharing.

Sincerely Victorious

God bless

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love poems with new life, new start, with stronger merit. Good luck to you:))


Posted 8 Years Ago


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Autumn at last! And a wonderful poem to welcome it! Cheers.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I loathe the summer doldrums as well. A fine welcoming for fall!

Well crafted and enjoyable read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Your annual poem for Autumn makes you queen and happy,while it makes me optimistic that people of next generations will get a perfect picture of Autumn.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, you always seem to impess me. I love Autumn and you do it justice. Cheers!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Aianarie (INACTIVE)
Aianarie (INACTIVE)

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