Turning Point

Turning Point

A Poem by Aianarie (INACTIVE)

If I had taken the other path

Where would I be now?

Many times I have contemplated

The many-faceted image

Of myself,

In a far different place.

 

If I had chosen darkness instead

What would have become of my soul?

Often I have cried to think

That so often I had neglected

My Saviour,

Who suffered everything for me.

 

If I turn around now

Would I go the alternate route?

Every time it rains, I look up to the sky

And remember every blessing

In my life,

And continue on my way.

© 2012 Aianarie (INACTIVE)


Author's Note

Aianarie (INACTIVE)
A simple poem I wrote a few nights ago.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Dear fragmented.dreams,

This reminded me of Wendsday night bible study in which I was passionately swept away into a series of questions that fired me up. I started to think about how I had been blessed and danced my pride because of those blessings. Sometimes, indeed, I wonder what it would have been like to stay in the darkness, but I can no longer go back.

My favorite line would have to be, "Every time it rains, I look up to the sky/And remember every blessing/In my life,/And continue on my way." I absolutely adored this line.

Thanks for sharing.

Sincerely Livana Lowell (LL)

God bless

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

Quite inspiring. I really loved the ending. Gives the reader a sense of hope and redemption. Great write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent write with a heart felt message!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot. A rise, a fall, and a resolution.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Roe
very emotional write

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

All of us wonder where we would be in we chose a different road and life. I believe easy to fall on the bad road. Hard to stay on the good one. If somehow we land on our feet and have love close by. We did Okay. I like the journey you took me with you in the poem. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dear fragmented.dreams,

This reminded me of Wendsday night bible study in which I was passionately swept away into a series of questions that fired me up. I started to think about how I had been blessed and danced my pride because of those blessings. Sometimes, indeed, I wonder what it would have been like to stay in the darkness, but I can no longer go back.

My favorite line would have to be, "Every time it rains, I look up to the sky/And remember every blessing/In my life,/And continue on my way." I absolutely adored this line.

Thanks for sharing.

Sincerely Livana Lowell (LL)

God bless

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very beautiful and emotional. :) I love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Never look back- Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple but a very well structured piece, well done, good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

768 Views
15 Reviews
Rating
Added on April 2, 2012
Last Updated on April 2, 2012
Tags: life, path, road, route, light, darkness, christian, inspirational

Author

Aianarie (INACTIVE)
Aianarie (INACTIVE)

Eugene, OR



About
**IMPORTANT: This account is inactive. To keep up with me, A.M. Wied, follow me at the Facebook link below! Thank you for your support!** Hello~! My name is Ashley and I am a great many things, .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..