Life...

Life...

A Poem by Adil
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The depiction of the levels of confusion one can create if he starts comparing the whole experience of life on a daily basis. But there are certain loopholes in this whole system as well at the end.

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The showers of joy,
The drought of pain,
The seasons of life,
Comes knocking again...

How many a times,
How many a day,
So less of life,
So much to pay...

Some have too less,
Some have too many,
The gamble of life,
Some gold, some penny...

There lies humor,
There lies misery,
The chariot of life,
Parts beaded Rosary..!!

© 2017 Adil


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Great poem!
What struck me most is the first stanza. Your poem sums up life.
Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adil

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your encouraging words...:)
In a simple way this is the way of life, we living today.
Thank you Adil for sharing..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adil

7 Years Ago

My pleasure Surya..Thanks for reviewing my work..:)
This piece seems simple but if time is taken, is deeper than first thought. I like it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adil

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Isabella for your valuable views..glad that u can find the inner meaning of the po.. read more
Isabella Ivy

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome! I. I. :-)

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Added on February 17, 2017
Last Updated on February 17, 2017
Tags: Life, seasons of life, tests of life, injustice, fair, complicated life, life lessons

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Adil
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Kolkata, India



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