Do You Even Care?

Do you even care at all?

Don’t try to save me

Maybe you’ll realize what you mean to me when I’m dead.

 

 

I’m way too depressed to be happy

My dearest Front, thank you

You keep my head held high

I know I can rely on you.

 

 

You tore my walls apart

You saved me from myself long ago

But now you’re not even close to help me

You promised me you wouldn’t leave.

 

 

 

It feels like I’m caged inside

I may be falling into myself once again

I’d rather want to go through fire than see you walk away

Well, actually I don’t know what to say.

 

 

You should be happy about my damn choice

If I’d chosen to care about my well being,

Then you wouldn’t be in my life

You know what damage you’re causing me.

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 25th of May 2011.

Dedication: My Savior.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion as always~

Reviews

[Leanne Conway]

This powerful, I love this poem, It's my favorite. Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and powerful poem. I could the emotion and desire for understanding and reason. Some questions are hard to get real answers for. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tasha]

This had such a powerful message. You did a really good job.

~ Ta'shandra

[Dahlia Phoenix]

The choices we make are the ones that we want to stick with. We always get our hopes up, lying to ourselves that everything will be okay when it isn't. I love this write and the powerful rhythm of words you use.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a powerful message. I think you did a really great job on this poem. I love the emotions. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Hello, Goodbye]

good expression on this recurring conflict that occurs..

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Emotional and deep my friend.

[TJ]

So sad and so deep! good flow and perfectly worded

[Balls:)]

this is really great.