Please... Listen To Me..

Shut Up And Read...

 

I gasp for air…

Again…

Damn…

What a depressed f****r I am…

Please…

Don’t do this to me…

I love you so…

Babe…

Please listen to me…

I CAN’T live without you…

Seriously…

Ask Sarah how I’m doing…

Maybe you’ll realize what I want to do to myself then…

Maybe she’ll show you another side of me…

The f*****g depressed side…

Of course I want to show it to you…

But…

You won’t seem to answer me at all…

Maybe…

Someday you’ll find out what I did to myself…

I can’t resist…

I’m way too fucked…

I’m fucked up…

Ask anyone…

Author's Note

Ignore grammar Problems..
Honest Opinion as always..

Reviews

[the in between]

Sounds like a letter mostly. It leaves me feeling confused I don't know why, but very direct. Sad. Great job for the subtle mood.

[M.Babu]

What a depressive tone you've implied to this piece...it really goes far in expressing the depth of the situation you're in.

Brief, concise, emotive.

Keep writing.

~M.Babu~

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and sad poem. I could feel the depression and desire for a answer. Strong statements made the poem strong and too real. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Just Cat]

Blunt, to the point, simple and sad- sadly relatable for me.
Such sad words.

Good work though :)

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Whoa.. o.0
So blunt to the point. Sometimes we expect to show the good side of what we are but other times we want them to know there is that other side that calls out to them and wants comfort especially when trying to act strong. Someone who truly loves accepts all one that doesn't is trash.

[Enigma]

Intense and utterly frank. Very powerful words.

[Hello, Goodbye]

candid writing..

[TJ]

Very gritty and beautiful in a tragic way. So strong and so much emotion...love the voice in this one

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Depression hits so hard my friend

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a sad, but good write...I really liked it...I can relate to it. Good job on this piece. Thanks for sharing.