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What Do I Have?

What Do I Have?

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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A challenge from Jessie McRiley.

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As I walk down the street

Looking at those happy teenagers

I feel devastated

Everyone’s holding onto something precious

And what do I have?

Nothing.

Nothing's left for me here, not anymore.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
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I enjoyed this. I can relate to this poem. I don't really have anything either. Realationships come and go. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Its sooooooo common to feel this way. But everyone feels that way!! You sound very normal to me.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It can fell that way at time

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aww. i like this! ^o^ i can relate. its so melancholy.. Very good message in this poem ^^

Posted 8 Years Ago


being the odd soul out is always painful, but soon that soul will blaze a trail that everyone else will long to follow

Posted 8 Years Ago


A short poem with a strong message. Sometime we feel the desire to escape. Same place make us feel locked and blocked in. I like the ending to this outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

easy to relate to and well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fantastic.. You should do more of these, actually everybody should, even me..
:)


Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this, I can realte to it, and it's sad. But you did really good on this, and I love it ^_^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 16, 2011
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