What Do I Have?

A challenge from Jessie McRiley.

As I walk down the street

Looking at those happy teenagers

I feel devastated

Everyone’s holding onto something precious

And what do I have?

Nothing.

Nothing's left for me here, not anymore.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I enjoyed this. I can relate to this poem. I don't really have anything either. Realationships come and go. Thanks for sharing.

[Kyle]

Its sooooooo common to feel this way. But everyone feels that way!! You sound very normal to me.

[Calypso]

It can fell that way at time

[Sleeping Maiden]

Aww. i like this! ^o^ i can relate. its so melancholy.. Very good message in this poem ^^

[Cherrie Palmer]

being the odd soul out is always painful, but soon that soul will blaze a trail that everyone else will long to follow

[Coyote Poetry]

A short poem with a strong message. Sometime we feel the desire to escape. Same place make us feel locked and blocked in. I like the ending to this outstanding poem.
Coyote

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easy to relate to and well written

[Jessie McRiley]

fantastic.. You should do more of these, actually everybody should, even me..
:)

[CharlesMonroe]

I really like this, I can realte to it, and it's sad. But you did really good on this, and I love it ^_^