I Long For You.

Here's a poem I found today. I wrote it back then Fallen broke up.

I want to see him smile because of me

I want to hear those three words

I want to feel his loving hands on my cheeks

I want to feel his soft lips pressed softly against mine.

 

 

Nightmares becomes daymares

Your presence haunts me

I still feel you in my sleep

Daymares are worse than nightmares

I will never have a break

You’ve crossed my mind so many times

You always do

I don’t love you like yesterday

I love you even more

Since you broke up

My feelings of you have grown so…

 

 

 

Since you left I’ve been so hollow

I didn’t care at all

I can’t keep track of things

I can’t do this

That agreement….

I still follow it…

It’s like… it’s the last thing I can do…

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 5th of June.

Dedication: A Fallen Hero

 

Author's Note

I found this poem today, and decided to publish it.
I do not feel the same way, I don't want to pick up the pieces, just to let you guys now.

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Calypso]

Last night I dreamed about the guy I love. The only problem is that we broke up. Leaves me sad....

[Daytonight]

This is so totally relatable! I am so very glad you were able to get beyond this. That is a very hard thing to do. Thank you for sharing this with us. Keep on penning.

[sarah]

I feel this....it stinks but it's good you have moved on. Great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Take time to forget someone and a special time. I still back to Germany 35 years ago and wished I held on to silence. Words leave permanent tattoos that can't heal.
"I don’t love you like yesterday
I love you even more
Since you broke up
My feelings of you have grown so…"
Life teaches us to be wise with emotion and words. They can bite us in the a*s. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Desmund Tiny]

I can relate to this poem....... you expressed emotions very well..... ^^,

[Just Cat]

Oh so relatable!
'Nightmares becomes daymares
Your presence haunts me' these lines aspecially ring true for me.
Thank you for sharing.
:)

[Layla Anne Massaro]

emotions are well expressed here, very good >:)

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

Your feelings are portrayed so strongly in this piece, that it really reaches out to the reader. I think this is a fantastic edition to your writing collection and I'm glad I had the priviledge of reading it = ]

-Femme_Gothique (Brittany)

[Valandil93]

Great sense of emotion.

[Lily Mae]

Excellent write.. xx