The Monster.

There's living a monster within us.

The Monster

Ain't a monster happy people know of

It rips my flesh open

Eating up my bleeding heart

“The Monster from within

Is nothing more than talk.”

That Monster, the evil from within

Is nothing more than my darkest urges

An urge that will stick to me forever in time

It’s like a parasite

It’s draining me, to grow, it feeds on me.

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[SinnerInspired]

Creepy But also very strong powerful

[Just Cat]

The monster within and the 'urges' are dark, raw and sinister, bit like this piece. Everything you write is dark, yet relatable, which I like a lot. I like the imagery in this too.
Great work.

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

I love this, my dear = ] It is deep, and it bit me with sharp teeth, drew me in! Your descriptions are fantastic and your words quench my thirst...wonderful job! = ]

-Femme_Gothique (Brittany)

[Lily Mae]

An excellent and powerful write..x

[Carrion.]

i reaally like it. it has imagery. i say go back and edit it a little. its not bad at all i just say you may be able to add more imagery 8)
Great:D
I look forward to reading more:D

[Caleb Pendleton]

I like how raw this piece is. There's true feeling in this poem, the emotions of someone being devoured by a beast that lack definition or even a name. It's a beast you've discovered, you're describing to us, and (in a way) warning us of just what he can do.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Powerfull poem. Loved it.