Die With A Smile.

Die With A Smile.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.



Hold your head held high

You sure are strong enough

I've known you for so long, I know you can do it.


“I’m living a nightmare…”

Please, oh please think positive

Life’s not a nightmare

I know I’m not the one to say, but believe me

Everything’s going to be alright.


I’ll make you happy, even if I die trying

I’ll die with a smile

Knowing that I did something for you

Something that you’ll remember.


Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 25th of July.

Dedication: Everyone.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.

Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

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I like this poem a lot. We need to leave a memory of us. I like the honest words with a strong ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Nice write

Posted 11 Years Ago

Dying trying to make someone happy seems such a worthwhile cause. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Dying with a smile to make someone else happy, that's sweet. i like it

Posted 11 Years Ago

Dying doing something rather than doing nothing at all is the best lesson here. To comfort the person who is being tortured by their own demons and helping them to go by them. Yes, life is difficult but we must continue on no matter what. This is touching.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Dying trying to save someone is a good way to go in my opinion. And dying with a smile sounds good too. Knowing the last thing you did was good is always a plus.
Interesting and thought provoking work.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Simple but really convincing! Even the title catches the interest of some readers... :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is really neat!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Beautifully dark and yet hopeful at the saem time - great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago

I really like this. it has a deep meaning:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

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