Dancing On My Own.

Dancing On My Own.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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I feel air fulfil my lungs

My heart beats Optimal now

I’m free now

I cannot feel the cage anymore

It vanished right in front of my eyes

Worries grew bigger and bigger

They became a huge parasite

A parasite I couldn’t handle

Yet it's bearable now

I can handle what I have to

I am dancing on my own now

No need to have a partner

Beyond all this pain you caused me

I rose from the spot;

Where you left my corpse

 

 

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
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I like the way you expressed your desire and freedom from pain. Life allow us to test the water of life and become wiser. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice positive message.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You are absolutely free now.YOU ROSE FROM THE SPOT.A nice poem indeed
yours jvl

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesomeness! Love the title!
100/100


Posted 12 Years Ago


But you'd do it all over again if we had the chance

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

omg.:D
anyways. Very good imagery and I love how in the end it says "I rose from the spot;
Where you left my corpse" it's deep, and it shows you've moved on. :DD very very very good(:




Posted 12 Years Ago


Dark.. I like it...the end was perfect...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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