Broken Wings.

Broken Wings.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.



My broken wings;

Can bear now

I am finally free

Nothing has a grip of me now

Nothing clues me to this world

Nothing but my increasing strength.


Writings on the wall


Are haunting me

I feel their structure;

Digging into my skin

Ripped scars open

Watched the red delicious blood run down.


© 2011 A Risen Heroine.

Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

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Gosh, I love it!! Deep and so vivid... this is just wonderful!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Another great write! Keep on penning.

Posted 11 Years Ago

To bleed for someone is a gift the missed person won't care about. Better to write down words and find a new reason to live. Love is a part of life. The other parts are needed to become whole in body and soul. A strong poem. Never freedom from pain and memory. Just engraved tattoos on our kids to remind us. Share kindness and love with the deserving. Not to give pity. Thank you for a excellent poem. Your words always made me think.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Outstanding write!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Another amazing, powerful poem. Keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Vivid descriptions and powerful words.
Another piece nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago

No grammar mistakes but GREAT optimism and freedom.Who can stop you?
yours JVL

Posted 11 Years Ago

The power of words can bring up many settings on what's occurring but this is nicely written with force and something of hope and pleasure.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Strong imagery that sticks with the reader

Posted 11 Years Ago

Powerful. Hits hard.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on July 30, 2011
Last Updated on July 30, 2011


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Hello my dear readers, I'm so sorry I won't post that much... God bless you all. (: ~A Risen Heroine~ more..


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